Here are a few edits that I put together with the photos I took on the weekend. I used the four hand photos and layered them. I wanted to create a feeling of old film with the different layers and blocks of color. Please comment which one you like best.
Also I Finished this piece on Friday
The gradated layering you created is interesting, but I think the quality of the original photos could be stronger. The pose of the hands is a little flat. You could emphasize volume more through pose and side lighting.
ReplyDeleteI really like your week two photos. The layering of each photo is very interesting and very different! I honestly would have never thought of doing that. I think you could take the photos in a different piont of view, and showing abstraction to make them stronger. I really enjoy your concentration series and photos! Nice work!
ReplyDeleteI like the top photo of the hands. The darker picture brings out the lines in the palms. I like how you combined the pictures. Your points of view are interesting and new. Good job with your concentration!
ReplyDeleteI like the hand photos! They give a x-ray feeling that kinda confuses you, but in a good way.
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